The darkness that revolves around me
Swallows my desperate hope slowly
Leaving me in a deserted state
Shattering all my dreams brutally
This heart, the creator of my pains
Did not pay heed to my cries
It rejoices at every tear I shed
Even if my prayers reached high
I no more have any fake smile
I don't know if I'm ever fine
I breathe in the poisonous oxygen
To let me live but my life can never shine
Devotedly I guard my grief
As I survive upon my sorrow
I weep cleaning all my sins - so that
Almighty will spare me tomorrow
5 comments:
So realistic feelings...Loved third stanza....Nicely written dear
I Loved The Last 2 Lines a Lot ..
And This Pic Is Just Just AwesOme Enough tO Express yOur Thoughts :)
Well GoIng Naaz ..
Naaz Awesum Poem (:
This Heart , Creator Of my Pains
Did Not Pay Heed o my Cries
it Rejoices At Every Tear i Shed
Even if my Prayers Reach High.
Nicely Expressed Naaz..
Ur Sorrows Have To End..
And You Have No sins To b Cleared ..
And Almighty Will b With You One Day.. To keep You Happy (:
So Nice Poem :)
Naazu Keep Going
Pic Also Telling ur All Feelings :)
good one =]
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