The pains that I find hard to control
Going through them only makes me whole
The pains that give birth to my tears
In crying they erase all my fears
These pains are sharper than the knife
They love to accompany me through the life
Only pains brought me down to my knees
They cruelly appear again at my pleas
To others these pains are wrong and bitter
Sensing them I became more fitter
In pain I weep at every song
The more I experience I only became strong
The pains which are not just pains for me
What I see not everyone can see
Day by day they make me addicted to - If
everyone stops inflicting it, never will you
11 comments:
3rd stanza says that pains make you stronger!!
I do agree!
But too much pain is also not good
Nice write!
Happy Blogging!
"These pains are sharper than the knife" ..
So Painful Lines ..
I Hope This Pain Wont Accompany You Till Ur Life.
And Waiting For The Day When a Ray Of Hapiness Destroys All ur Pains..
Silent Prayers..
Awesum Poem :)
Very Painful poem Naazu :(
Take Care
love yu
Cool Writing... 3 para show my pain !!!!
Keep writing such poen Naaz !!
Adois!!!
well said naaz =)
Thank u Trupthi, Mohit n Pari. Thanx for liking it n encouraging me ...
2nd Para Is Damn True ..
Keep It Up Naaz ..
Well GoIng :)
Naaz ur Pain Will Surely End One Day ..
Silent Prayers :) ..
Smile .. Cos it Heals Ur Pain :)..
Awesum Poem
nyc poem n hurting !!
keep it up naaz ;)
Nice Poem naaz
much Hurting
keep it up
Love you Honey :)
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